Recently infectious diseases swept up in our school.Many classes of students are suffering from symptoms such as vomiting and fever.All of this is due to a virus called “norovirus”.The virus causes diarrhea vomiting nausea abdominal pain headaches and muscle aches.At present our school has been active in the prevention of infectious diseases,similar to the isolation class students and normal class students keep a distance large areas of disinfection vowed to win the "fight against war".
写作英文报道的尝试值得肯定,句式使用比较多样,但需格外注意语法和标点问题。如be suffered from;causes后面一系列症状用逗号隔开;similar to应改为such as;最后一句语义不通,请加以修改
—— beryl222
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